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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Speculation: F58 part 2

    This is interesting, I'd really like to see what happens next. Please, please, please post some more! There's just one thing; this is a really good story, don't ruin it ...

    Aug 7, 2009
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Just wanted to know what you think.

    Hi, Baboon! Thank you for reviewing my story! I'm glad you liked it, so I thought I'd return the favor. I had to read this a couple times to get ...

    Aug 6, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: MechaNet Pt. 2

    Hi, hero! Well I thought it was good! :D I know how nerve racking waiting for someone to review your story is, So I understand how you feel. Don't dump ...

    Aug 6, 2009
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Torture Chamber

    Whoo . . . that was . . . scary. I saw a lot of spelling errors and several sentences could have been written better. Another suggestion, when a new ...

    Aug 5, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Riversong: Path to Paradise (Prologue and Chapter 1)

    That is really good! The characters are very well described and I was actually able to follow the story! The way you characterized the dogs was great. It's very realistic ...

    Aug 4, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Untitled Project (Title Ideas Welcome)

    This story is really good! There are so many possibilities for what could happen! I'm not going to do a review because I not good at correcting other peoples' stuff. ...

    Aug 3, 2009
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read

    The worst book I have ever read was about a computer game that came to life and a boy had to save the aliens or something like that. I read ...

    Aug 3, 2009


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